After heard many advices and making changes finally another rough reel was produced. In this new versions I changed many scenes and gave the story much faster rhythm. Thanks for people who gave me advices and new ideas, really appreciated. The goal of this rough reel is to get the right timing and to test if those new ideas works out well. If there is no accident I will start to make a more detail version of it(hopefully). Still welcome for any advice for improvement. Thank you~!!!